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Wonderful writing {formtext: name=student name} !
Outstanding informative writing assignment! You made sure to have a topic sentence, text evidence, elaboration, and a concluding sentence in your paragraph. I love how you stayed on topic and used text evidence. 
Let's take a closer look at this assignment: 

  • Topic sentence: {formmenu: name=Sentence; default=0; 2.5}/2.5 
  • Cited text-based evidence: {formmenu: name=Text Evidence;0; 1; default=2; 3; 4; 5}/5 
  • Explained your evidence (elaboration): {formmenu: name=Explanation; default=0; 1; 2; 3; 4; 5}/5 
  • Closing sentence: {formmenu: name=Closing Sentence; default=0; 2.5}/2.5 
  • Grammar, punctuation, spelling: {formmenu: name=Mechanics; default=0; 1; 2; 3; 4; 5}/5 
One area of writing I'd really like to see you focus on for your next writing assignment is your {formmenu: name=area to fix; multiple=yes; default=Including a topic and closing sentence; citing and explaining your text evidence; grammar, punctuation and spelling; making sure you keep up your amazing writing skills}. 
Next up, you'll practice describing story elements in "Do the Right Thing." It will be a "piece of cake" with skills like yours!  Keep being awesome!! 
You Rock!
Mrs. Nowicki

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