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I reviewed your written response. {formmenu: The response successfully
addresses the task with an
effective organizational structure,
creating a sense of completeness,
coherence, and cohesion. The
response is fully developed with a
controlling idea throughout. The response addresses the task
with thorough support for the
claim and includes the effective
use of relevant sources, facts, and
details. The response effectively
develops ideas using precise
language. The response demonstrates an
adequate control of conventions.; default=The response adequately addresses
the task with an observable
organizational structure and a sense
of completeness, though some
ideas may be loosely connected.
The response is sufficiently
developed with a controlling idea.The response addresses the task
with sufficient support for the
claim and includes the use of
sources, facts, and details. The
response sufficiently develops
ideas using both precise and
general language. The response demonstrates a
partial control of conventions.; The response addresses the task
with an inconsistent
organizational structure. The
response is somewhat
developed and may drift from
the controlling idea.The response addresses the task
with superficial support for the
claim and includes the partial
use of sources, facts, and details.
The response may express ideas
using basic or simplistic
language.The response demonstrates a
partial control of conventions.; The response attempts to
addresses the task with little
or no observable
organizational structure. The
response may be related to
the claim but provides only a
minimal controlling idea.
The response attempts to
address the task with
minimal support for the claim
and includes little or no use
of sources, facts, and details.
The response is unclear or
confusing.The response demonstrates
little or no control of
conventions; The response is
undeveloped
and/or
inappropriate to
the task,
purpose, and
audience. The response is
undeveloped, lacks
elaboration, and
provides no support
related to the claim. The response demonstrates
little or no control of
conventions.; Nonscorable
A response is nonscorable if it meets any of the following criteria.
• Unintelligible
• In a language other than English
• Off-topic
• Copied text; name=quality_of_ideas}

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